

The Marjorie Series -
Republished by Girls Gone By (GGB), 2007
Background
Border Peel is the third “Marjorie” book and like Stolen Holiday the text was altered before publication to remove overt wartime references though the donkey who is the instrument of Marjorie’s humiliation is called Lord Haw Haw “after that traitor English johnnie.....”
The GGB edition prints as appendices the changes from the original manuscript and those between the first and second editions.
Synopsis
The book begins immediately Stolen Holiday ends with the clan (minus the drummed-
“Marjorie would think up something, you bet!” Peter sighed.
On cue Marjorie appears dramatically jumping the tennis net on Dulcie, a borrowed pony far more suited to her than the staid Black Magic. She is desperate to get back into the clan and Guy devises a humiliation ceremony in which she is led publicly on Lord Haw Haw, facing his tail and clad in sackcloth and ashes – a cleverly chosen penance as Marjorie cares about her appearance and dignity very much.
Back in the clan she immediately comes up with the idea of a week at a peel house she has discovered near Bellingham. Of course, Guy knows it already as it is situated in his ancestral homeland much to Marjorie’s chagrin. But he didn’t think of it...
Exploring a wood Esme comes across a handsome boy, Ralph Fenwick (16), the local landowner, tormenting a lame boy, Thomas, who has been poaching as his grandfather has lost his job. It transpires that Fenwicks and Charltons have been at daggers drawn for generations from the days of the Border Reivers and this feud forms the basis of the plot. Various things occur – the clan meets Judith, Ralph’s much nicer and beloved sister, Peter’s and Guy’s clothes are stolen while they are swimming and in retaliation the clan steal the Fenwick’s ponies.
A subplot involves teaching Thomas to ride and finding him a pony. Ralph Fenwick sees the clan’s interest in Thomas and decides to evict his grandfather but Marjorie comes up with the scheme of kidnapping Judith before a gymkhana where she hoped to win a saddle (the Fenwicks are penniless) and ransoming her in return for a promise from Ralph to let the grandfather remain in his cottage. And Marjorie is thus able to engineer a pony swap. Peter gets Black Magic, she gets the spirited Dulcie and Thomas gets Peter’s stolid Simon – and can keep him as his grandfather keeps the cottage. Dulcie is paid for by the clan’s gymkhana winnings. Oh, and Judith gets her saddle as a result of Guy’s skilful riding.
There are the obligatory spats between Marjorie and Guy but Marjorie has the last laugh as Guy does not realise perms are indeed permanent.
Pleasingly, there is more pony interest in this book than in some of the others and further character development. We learn more about Marjorie’s homelife: richer in financial terms but so much poorer in other respects than the others. But we see a good side to her, albeit prompted by some ulterior motivation. Guy is his usual Edwardian self but Pan is beginning to question whether he is always right and he does use her as a confidante and turns to her for wise counsel. Pan is very well drawn and continues to agonise about her appearance. I see her growing up to be like Sarah Burton the splendid headmistress in “South Riding”. And Marjorie? She’ll end up a gin sodden wreck racketing around Soho – when not riding hard to hounds.
Diane Janes
Lorna Hill (1948)
Republished by Girls Gone By (GGB), 2004
Background
The second “Marjorie” book was originally set in 1939 and called “Mystery on the
Links”. It was substantially altered for publication in 1948, as the publishers believed
that there would be no market for books which referred too much to War amongst a
war weary public in a time of austerity. The major changes are to the sub-
To an adult reader with hindsight, the 1939 version is probably the better book and discusses some quite serious themes, but the basic children/ponies/swimming/holiday story is not much altered by the 1948 update.
The GGB reprint helpfully reprints the 1939 text with annotations, changes and deletions for comparison.
Synopsis
It is a year on from “Marjorie and Co.” and the Clan are to stay with Big Alice, who, in more prosperous times, was a maid to Pam’s parents, in her house in Bamburgh, Northumberland, while the adults holiday variously in Skye, the Highlands and Norway (“Marjorie’s people, who are disgustingly rich and can afford luxuries”).
Conveniently they find that Big Alice has been rushed into hospital, so the Clan resourcefully decides to go to Pan and Peter’s parents’ rickety bungalow in the dunes near Beadnell along the coast.
The holiday follows the usual pattern, the ponies always there, but not centre stage, though there is some nice banter from Peter, Pan’s brother (replacing stolid Toby, whose protective mother has kept him at home with an illness), on the virtues of bicycles versus ponies. He is being taught to ride by Guy on the quiet Simple Simon.
As well as an exciting moonlight bathe, a visit to a funfair, where Marjorie provokes Guy’s wrath, an adventurous boat trip to the Farne Islands, in which Guy heroically rescues Marjorie – who is injured as a result of her own foolishness and her defiance of Guy – and Marjorie’s birthday party, there is the ongoing mystery of Paul and Gina; Who are they? Where are they from? Where do they live?
There are a number of telling cameos and incidents which reveal more about the children’s characters.
Gina proves to be a dashing and natural rider in an impromptu display on Black Magic, but has a subdued and proper lesson on Simple Simon with Guy after a battle of wills: she is not unlike Marjorie.
Esmé (who is totally humourless) has an impassioned argument with Guy over hunting and her (and Lorna Hill’s) great love of animals is displayed further in a rabbit shooting incident.
There is the usual tension between Guy and Marjorie, with each exhibiting the worst sides of their characters with Pan ruefully concluding: “I felt that none of us really understood Marjorie” and Guy, in an unguarded moment, confessing that he and Marjorie are rather alike.
Pan, the plain narrator, is the most clear sighted of the Clan. She challenges Guy with “How do you know what is for the best?” and her ability to see two sides of a story (unlike Guy or Marjorie) leads to the discovery of the truth about Gina and Paul and a recognition that it is unfair of Guy and Peter (boys) to keep a secret from the others (girls).
Although the end of the story is a happy one for Paul and Gina, it is not so for the Clan. As a result of her jealousy of Esmé, Marjorie behaves appallingly, causing the premature end of the stolen holiday and is subsequently (and literally) drummed out of the Clan at a ceremony that everyone feels uncomfortable with.
But, as Esmé says “Marjorie has a habit of bouncing up again….” And Pan writes “…. Though it seemed impossible at the time, this is just what happened, though how it came about I will have to tell you at some future time”.
Diane Janes
LORNA HILL (1953)
Castle in Northumbria follows on from Border Peel. It is Easter and all the members
of the clan – Guy (16), Toby (12), Esme, Pan and Marjorie (all now 14) are keen to
go back to the Peelhouse but it is stacked with grain. Pan’s twin, Peter, is potholing
in Yorkshire to the incomprehension of the others as no ponies are involved. Guy
has discovered a semi-
For once it is not Toby who is prevented from going by his super-
However, it is not long before Marjorie does turn up, oddly minus Dulcie her pony. Guy arranges for her to borrow Simon, the gentle pony given by the clan to Thomas in the nearby village. Simon is not spirited enough for Marjorie and she beats him mercilessly. Thomas stands up to her and is supported by Guy provoking another confrontation with Marjorie who runs away leaving a pathetic suicide note.
Woven into the story is the usual preoccupation with food, Guy’s teasing of the humourless Esme and the renewal of the friendship with Judith Fenwick as well as a meeting with snobbish Sylvia Wade. She doesn’t really like riding or ponies but likes the extremely smart clothes that go with them. And there is a storm which reveals that Guy’s camping arrangements are less than perfect.
After finding Marjorie and discovering how she has ingeniously managed to avoid going to the crammer and that her parents don’t know she hasn’t, one of her punishments is to do Latin for an hour a day with Guy and another is to lend the penniless Judith a beautiful dress. The culmination of the holiday is a May Day Festival at which Judith is a perfect May Queen in Marjorie’s dress.
There is a perfunctory sub plot, rather tacked on at the end involving Thankless having to be sold to Sylvia Wades’s parents but this comes to naught as an unknown uncle conveniently dies leaving Ralph Fenwick all his money.
Ralph doesn’t actually appear but has arranged to take Marjorie to what Guy considers
an unsuitable film. Personally, I’m sorry he doesn’t appear as he has the potential
to be a spledidly wicked “Sir Jasper” figure – if he had a moustache, he’d twirl
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CONCLUSION
This book has a valedictory air, with discussions on growing up and the suggestion that Guy will be sent to “ the continent” for two years. There is a reconciliation of sorts between Guy and Marjorie at the end, each recognising the strengths of the other. Very satisfactorily we find that Guy’s father has bought the castle in Northumbria so Charltons will finally return to their ancestral lands .
Diane Janes
Northern Lights
Lorna Hill (c1940s)
Consigned to an attic for over 50 years, it was discovered in 1997 and published in 1999. Republished by Girls Gone by in 2009, this edition has a very informative introduction narrating the publishing history of all Lorna Hill’s books, a note on the text and a preface to 1999 edition by Vicki Emley who is Lorna Hill’s daughter.
Background
Northern Lights is the fourth Marjorie story, coming after Border Peel and before
Castle in Northumbria. It was rejected for publication because it was considerd
that by the late 1940s the war weary public would not be interested in children’s
books which mentioned World War 2. The war does feature but does not really impinge
once the story gets going. The children manage to organise a Christmas holiday in
a rather well appointed vicarage, safe in the country as a result of a near-
Synopsis
Guy is staying in the vicarage to mug up his latin with the Vicar and is also teaching at a local riding school (the regular staff being at war or doing war work). After the adventure of getting there Pan and Peter are dismayed to find they have to take tea with some dreary children whose parents are friends of their parents. Coincidentally Guy has to teach Avril the arrogant girl to ride. He does of course win her over and teaches her some humility and thoughtfulness in her dealings with her downtrodden governess. There is, as usual, a battle between Guy and Marjorie with honours fairly even at the end but this is less of a theme than in some of the other books as Avril is pretty obnoxious and Gina the polish refugee reappears and is fairly impossible, too so the emphasis is off Marjorie. Gina’s behaviour results in the loss of the pony she has been loaned for the holidays – quite right too as she is not prepared to look after it properly – and her running away leading to the set piece ending with the children being marooned in a snow bound cottage and living on snared rabbits and cocoa which causes animal loving Esme an anguished conscience. The Aurora Borealis or Northern Lights foretell the hard weather and the book ends with the children watching their beauty unrolling over the snwy landscape.
There is no strong plot in this story but the each character is developed through
a number of incidents. A lot of the apalling Gina’s behaviour is attributable to
her disrupted childhood, loss of Mother and Country : particularly poignant at Christmas.
On Christmas Day Marjorie receives a big cheque from her absent parents whereas Peter,
Pan and Esme get visits and carefully chosen moderate gifts from theirs. Peter, who
is rather a weak boy who tries unsuccessfully to imitate Guy and constantly denigrates
girl’s abilities, comes into his own at a WI Christmas Show as an ace horse noise
imitator and saves the show. The evening is beautifully realised. Surely Lorna Hill
must have attended many such! Guy is a keen foxhunter as are Marjorie and Peter
but Esme is instinctively and vehemently anti which leads to a clash with neither
side attempting to comprehend the other’s point of view over the Boxing Day meet
and the subsequent saving of a hunted fox. Pan is thoughtful and struggles with the
dilemma of loving the tradition and spectacle and respecting the participants but
knowing it is cruel and wrong. I really like Pan; I want her to be my friend -
Diane Janes